Less emo, more porn.

I just came across a whole half a chapter that seemed ok before. But now that I read it again, the character seems to be an emo little bitch. It starts off a vampire just fed on him and now he’s complaining of feeling like a whore because of it. Maybe show the guy on guy vampire feeding action, and minimal complaining about being a whore at the very end – hence the title of this post.

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